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Freedom of choice is a big deal for young adults who are striving for independence. Teenagers have the knowledge and the resources to start making their own decisions whether they are right or wrong. One of these decisions should be the choice between healthy and unhealthy meals, however the government is eliminating this freedom by banning junk food in schools. This new law is not only limiting the food choices a student has, but it is also reducing the yearly profits in vending machines, and it's forcing students to buy junk food else where. Students should decide for themselves if they want eat healthy in school, it is not law should force them to.
Freedom of choice is a big deal for young adults who are striving for independence. Teenagers have the knowledge and the resources to start making their own decisions whether they are right or wrong. One of these decisions should be the choice between healthy and unhealthy meals, however the government is eliminating this freedom by banning junk food in schools. This new law is not only limiting the food choices a student has, but it is also reducing the yearly profits in vending machines, and it's forcing students to buy junk food else where. Students should decide for themselves if they want eat healthy in school, it is not law should force them to.
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Swallowing a pill, jumping off a building, and hanging from a tree are only a few of the ways people are found committing suicide. For young adults, acts of suicide are a lot of the times caused by the bullying of peers. Schools have been addressing the problems of bullying almost every year since Kindergarten which gives students no excuse harass anyone. Therefore bullies should be treated like criminals because they know how it affects other students, they might not bully people if they knew they would be arrested, and there are strict laws against harassment.
Swallowing a pill, jumping off a building, and hanging from a tree are only a few of the ways people are found committing suicide. For young adults, acts of suicide are a lot of the times caused by the bullying of peers. Schools have been addressing the problems of bullying almost every year since Kindergarten which gives students no excuse harass anyone. Therefore bullies should be treated like criminals because they know how it affects other students, they might not bully people if they knew they would be arrested, and there are strict laws against harassment.
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The earth looks huge and so incredibly beautiful from a distance that it would take anyone's breath away. This is a sight that has been seen by very few people on earth, however with all the new technology that is being discovered there is a chance for more of the world to explore outer space. The Enterprise a space ship owned by the Virgin Galactic will be taking passengers into outer space for their own enjoyment. Although space travel can dangerous it can't a whole lot more risky than climbing Mount Everest, plus it's the individual's decision if they want to put themselves in harms way. This trip will be relatively safe only healthy people eighteen or older can ride, it's not cheap, and people will enjoy themselves.
The earth looks huge and so incredibly beautiful from a distance that it would take anyone's breath away. This is a sight that has been seen by very few people on earth, however with all the new technology that is being discovered there is a chance for more of the world to explore outer space. The Enterprise a space ship owned by the Virgin Galactic will be taking passengers into outer space for their own enjoyment. Although space travel can dangerous it can't a whole lot more risky than climbing Mount Everest, plus it's the individual's decision if they want to put themselves in harms way. This trip will be relatively safe only healthy people eighteen or older can ride, it's not cheap, and people will enjoy themselves.